Here are the last three reviews from Amazon. One says the story is too complex with too many characters. Another says its a "good simple book" without a lot of different scenarios and one says it's just right.
...and they all lived happily ever after.
"Intentions are excuses in disguise." - Tom Deaderick, March 14, 2021 While working on my upcoming book.
"Ideas are like radar, they can only be measured by sending them out and observing what comes back." - Tom Deaderick, March 12, 2021 While working on my upcoming book.
Studied two good books on screenwriting. SAVE THE CAT, by Blake Snyder THE SCREENWRITER'S BIBLE by David Trottier ...and read a lot of helpful, and not as helpful guides on the web, to help me write a
Tom Deaderick